Warming

In naked feet she marvels the floor
must unravel night's biting cold
a champagne will do its chore;
warmed body in moments
from devouring sip,
as wine bathing 
her softy 
velvet
lips
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Guzzi Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 4:09 PM
I had never seen this form before. The poem's very nice. Line 1 period at the end. Line 2 capital M, period at chore. Line 4 capital W. Line 9 lips.
Torres Avatar
October 21, 2008 at 8:28 PM
Very romantic and vivid full of emotion and feeling. Nice write . Blessings Michael
White Avatar
October 18, 2008 at 4:39 PM
love this write, it evokes memories and i can feel the warmth within this write, it plays on one's mind, take cae D-nyce
Anos Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 11:20 PM
This is a poem I can truly relate with! i also like drinking once in a while... brgds. George
Richards Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 10:45 AM
Amazing poem in the nonet form! Great job, wonderful image of the drink that warms. Nicely written!! :) ~ Carrie
Jordan Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 5:46 AM
Teresita this is a wonderful example of this form - I no longer drink myself but I can certainly recall its warming affect - I was a Jack man myself - Now all I drink is coffee, water and every once in a while I'll have a glass of milk - God Bless
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October 17, 2008 at 4:54 AM
Ooooh great ending!!! You began it differently and ended up with so much passion. Love, Chitra
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