"warm Peaches"

Your kisses my love are like a warm peach..
Your lips my sweet are so soft to the touch..
A summer day under a tree to look up to a fruit 
I will soon reach..
The first bite , the first taste.. Raise my sugar level
to a wonderful place..
A warm July night sharing our time, a lovely scent
that I know is mine..
The touch of your hands, the caress of your face..
The velvet feel sends my insides to race..
So many fruits I can campare you too..
But a warm peach my love is best compared to you..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 8:17 AM
I am enjoying these gems I haven't read yet.. watch your sugar levels MJF lol ;-)
M Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 6:20 AM
Your simile of a kiss with a warm peach is so tender and seductive ...and visual (I can see peach fuzz & facial fuzz against a background of bright light.) Also, the "rising sugar level" to represent his arousal is great. Enjoyed.
Chircop Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 6:11 AM
very soft,ripe and sweet-Charma
Devonshire Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 5:57 AM
Like the way you compar your love to a "warm peach" whose skin has the feel of velvet. Nice rhyme, Michael! Love, Carolyn
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April 8, 2010 at 5:53 AM
Enjoyed!
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