Carolyn Devonshire Poet Haiku

Warm Gold Nectar Soothes

full moon basks in light
reflecting the sun’s bright rays…
     illumination

void of emotion
the cratered face seems to stir…
     light lost as sun moves

amber crescent hangs
tip it an sip its Chablis…
     warm gold nectar soothes



*Entry for Joe Maverick’s haiku contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2012 at 5:21 AM Congratulations on your win in Joe's "Haiku Challenge" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti August 6, 2012 at 7:53 PM Congratulations on your winning haiku.

Andrea Dietrich August 6, 2012 at 2:47 PM Awesome title line, Carolyn. congrats on this wonderful win. How are you feeling? I hope you are doing well right now. LUv, Andrea

Harry Horsman August 5, 2012 at 3:17 PM these are wonderful Carolyn, so awesome reading your poetry again.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 5, 2012 at 2:15 PM Carolyn, congrats on a wonderful win! I hope you are feeling the prayers and hugs being sent to you...love and blessings, Rhonda

Lee Ramage August 5, 2012 at 12:12 PM excellent, well done. Really enjoyed. Lee

David Williams August 5, 2012 at 11:44 AM Carolyn congrats on your win, love it...David

Kash Poet May 22, 2012 at 1:32 AM Check for typo in the penultimate line Carolym.'an' or 'and'?

Kash Poet May 13, 2012 at 2:06 PM Wonderful imagery in these haiku Carolyn.Best wishes for the contest.

Russell Sivey May 12, 2012 at 10:15 PM What a wonderful write my friend! This poem is quite the honorable write peppered in with some charisma and happiness! Great Work!!