Warm Carpet

Ice blue winter sky
Epiphanous window sun -
Floor nap nirvana
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Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 5:28 AM
Creative. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 12:30 AM
this is a really gorgeous haiku. Inventive.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 3:17 PM
- Great haiku, David - well done ! - Wish you a nice weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mohn Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 5:07 PM
Thank you Anne Lise :) You have a nice weekend also
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