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Wargames Couplet

W Archie fell, shot, in the bullet strewn street R G And when tea was ready he leapt to his feet M E S 12 November 2020 For Kim’s Acrostic Play contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/2/2020 1:16:00 PM

War games indeed, Terry, you made it child's play! Congratulations on your win. Very clever - took us one way and then twirled us around 180 degrees!

Terry Flood
Date: 12/2/2020 2:22:00 PM

Thank you, Sam. Glad you liked it.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/25/2020 7:08:00 AM

Hi Terry, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a Wonderful Thanksgiving:-) Alexis

Terry Flood
Date: 11/25/2020 10:32:00 AM

Thank you Alexis. You too.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/25/2020 6:47:00 AM

I loved this write, Terry! If all such war was only a game. Congrats on first place!

Terry Flood
Date: 11/25/2020 10:43:00 AM

Thank you Kim. Not my ‘usual’ style so well chuffed.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2020 5:38:00 PM

Oh that was cute, how he jumped up when tea was ready. Inventive poem!

Terry Flood
Date: 11/13/2020 5:45:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. When I was a kid, if you got shot when playing ‘war’ you had to be tagged and ‘released’ to be alive again. I don’t suppose kids play ‘war’ anymore. Shame really, because we all realised that when it was for real, you didn’t get ‘released’.