War Path (Faleshia Vs Esther)
Now you have some nerve making nasty
Comments on people's poetry
Now you all messed up
bumping heads with me
You really need a life
I hope you can find one
It's only going to take me a minute
To get this task done and have fun
You carry your class in a plastic bag
You are no good just like a dirty rag
Reading your poetry is so so sad
If I was you I wouldn't ever ever brag
There's no doubt in my mind
Your just a waste of people's time
Instead of writting poetry
You have better luck committing crimes
They need to send me to Iraq
Because I'm ready to explode
I'll do it for my country
And any two bit ho ho ho
I did santa a favor delivering this gift
So from now on you shold hate christmas
You better crawl back
Into your little hole dirty mouse
Next time I'm going to charge you
But this one is on the house
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