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War Child

Little girl, trying to sleep in your bed don’t listen to the sound of the bombs nearby just close your eyes and try not to cry and let your brother sing you a lullaby. And don’t listen to the noise of the guns as the bullets flash by your door, don’t cry just think of the peace found in sleep while your brother sings you a lullaby. Little girl, as you sleep in your bed when you dream, try not to dream of the day when soldiers came with their guns and took your father away. And when you wake up to a new day looking for the sun, through the dust and smoke try to find some hope in that terrible place as you and your brother strive to cope. Little girl, war is the world of grown ups and there is nothing you can do even if you tell them of your fear and sorrow no one will listen to you.

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Date: 4/6/2015 8:45:00 PM
Tim, children are too young to know what war is. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 4/7/2015 2:30:00 AM
Thank you Cynthia, It's always good to receive such encouraging comments, My confidence is not always as high as others! best wishes, Tim
Date: 11/11/2010 1:48:00 AM
Thank you Carol, very kind of you to comment, take care, Tim
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Date: 11/10/2010 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Tim. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2010 7:21:00 AM
Worthy poem with lots of wisdom
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Date: 3/24/2010 9:23:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/24/2010 1:52:00 PM
Congrats Tim... I'm very excited to see and read more from you....
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Date: 3/24/2010 11:13:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week...May God Bless you always...-Brittany-
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Date: 3/23/2010 4:20:00 AM
Deep. True. And sadly, changes is not in sight. Congratulations Tim, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/22/2010 2:53:00 PM
Good write, Tim. If the world remained in childhood we might be better off. Love, daver
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Date: 3/22/2010 8:40:00 AM
THANK YOU-everyone for your kind comments Tim
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 4:20:00 AM
Congrats on the featured poem---well done!!
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Date: 3/22/2010 3:06:00 AM
very good, enjoyed this poem
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Date: 3/22/2010 2:46:00 AM
Thank you Janette and Gary for your comments. I've not worked out how to respond to people yet, is this the right place? Tim
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Date: 3/21/2010 12:24:00 PM
Many congrats on your deserved featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 3/10/2010 7:01:00 AM
A poem so well written. I will never understand the wars the world put us in..Enjoyed reading...tata
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