War

Why do people create War? Bombarding each other til the spirit is raw Inflicting pain on strangers It’s a numbers game...who kills more. No one wants to lose So death is what they choose Who made THESE people “God”? Where in hell did they get their views? What is so wrong? For mankind to get along For us to experience peace To come together and be strong Please someone, wave the white flag Remove your stifling gag Spread the word of peace and love HATE is not a word used by God above. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ©copyright Juanita Torr ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Kimmy Thieleke

Date: 1/12/2013 6:04:00 PM

Awee. Powerful thoughts. I too feel very strongly about war. i give the upmost honor and respect to anyone that has, is or will serve, god keep them safe.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/5/2013 8:37:00 PM

War, is an out of the question image.. wish the white flag was always up... the poem comes in powerful... i truly love it... pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2013 8:17:00 PM

A great message in your poem, and I see you are a new member. Welcome!

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/4/2013 11:57:00 AM

This is written from your heart Juanita...I feel your angst... As Richard says below, '...until Jesus comes again...' we can expect wars...still, we must keep our hopes alive. Great job! Have a great weekend! Always, Annalise Chek your Soup Mail

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/4/2013 9:40:00 AM

Unfortunately until Jesus comes again this World will not have any lasting Peace.

Bijo Saab

Date: 1/4/2013 3:08:00 AM

Good job ! I like it.