War

A river of tears flows into
an ocean of blood while
the devil laughs louder in
the shadows of dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 6, 2011 at 11:04 PM
Pat, wow! What a taunted laugh... creepy just to think what is behind them shadowy dreams... thank u 4 sharing..p.d.
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September 7, 2011 at 12:03 AM
Thank you very much as I do enjoy pleasing others with my lyrics.I do have alot more to learn in the writing field but will put out what I have written and hope you and others will enjoy.Thanks again.
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