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A river of tears flows into an ocean of blood while the devil laughs louder in the shadows of dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/6/2011 11:04:00 PM
Pat, wow! What a taunted laugh... creepy just to think what is behind them shadowy dreams... thank u 4 sharing..p.d.
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Pat Mccoy
Date: 9/7/2011 12:03:00 AM
Thank you very much as I do enjoy pleasing others with my lyrics.I do have alot more to learn in the writing field but will put out what I have written and hope you and others will enjoy.Thanks again.

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