Wants and Wishes

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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5. Centered, no rhyme.

When night falls close your eyes and relax drift off to sleep and weave memories into dreams. Allow your wants and wishes to transport you into a fantasy world uniquely defined by your imagination. (Yalto) 02/06/2020

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/6/2020 5:41:00 PM

Hello Emile Pinet, it sounds like a good idea to me. Have a nice evening my friend.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/7/2020 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/6/2020 3:03:00 PM

Many books suggest dreams are essential for maintaining mental health. They are wonderful vehicles that reveal our innermost thoughts and wishes. Beautifully penned, Emile! Best wishes, Carolyn

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/6/2020 4:20:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn, I always enjoy reading your comments my friend, Emile.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/6/2020 12:44:00 PM

Very nice. Peaceful, Emile :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/6/2020 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Heidi, I always appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.