Wants

the wants n needs that we don't get, are held inside with some regret, to never quite be loved and yet, some sweet times came my way, as Clint said "make my day". too subtle 4 to fretttt.... passion feeds my debt... thanks p.d. Don
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Williams Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 3:16 PM
Don, you made my day..Dave
Maverick Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 6:21 AM
Gives wanting a passionate place on the page Don..) pleasure reading today..
Onclaud Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 2:23 AM
been a while, don... how are you?... blimey tech problems here but had to stop by to say this piece is so comforting!.. :) huggs!
Kendrick Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 5:36 PM
Interesting work..Good luck in the contest if an entry in one...Reads like a winning one to me..Good rhyme..Sara
Sivey Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 4:55 PM
Oh wow Don, this is a truly beautiful write my friend! I really love this poem immensely! I think this write to be remarkable and very enjoyable! Thank you for sharing this poem with us all! Great Work!!
Dillard Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 4:44 PM
Have no regret! Let ink share your passion on paper for all to know. Loved it! RAY
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