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Wanting Reflections

Searching Beams, wanting reflections, for sailors to see For Raul's contest

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Date: 12/9/2009 10:09:00 AM
Fantastic haiku my love...paints the pic clearly!! Love ya~Mary
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Date: 12/2/2009 6:26:00 PM
nicely done, I disagree with Jared though, I have a hard time with Haiku, due to the syllable counts are hard to stick to and make a nice flowing poem. just my thought.
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Date: 12/2/2009 5:41:00 AM
Haikus are easy... Double or triple them.... Mix it with a senryu, or a tanka!!!!!! Good write pop....:JP]
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