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Wanting Love Forever

Some people stay together, some don’t even try some just don’t know how to, some just don’t see why. They don’t believe in love, because someone broke their hearts now they say goodbye to love, before it even starts. But we believe in Forever, loving like we do giving love to each other, in the things we do. Caring about each other, more than just ourselves hands and hearts together, wanting love forever. They wonder how we feel this way, after all the years still in love with each other, with more laughter than there’s tears. They find it hard, to believe, we can be this way maybe they just never had, a love that came to stay. But we believe in Forever, loving like we do giving love to each other, in the things we do. Caring about each other, more than just ourselves hands and hearts together, wanting love forever. Perhaps if they found someone, who could mend a broken heart that very special someone, then they would never part. They would be loved by someone, for more than just a day then maybe too they would know, a love that came to stay. And they’d believe in Forever, nothing else would do giving love to each other, in the things they do. Caring about each other, more than just themselves hands and hearts together, wanting love forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/23/2010 10:35:00 AM
Great love write....Glad that you have found love and you are willing to work at making it work...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/23/2010 9:09:00 AM
Thank you Amy, do you know where thank you messages like this can be put? or do you just put it here like I'm doing now if yoy see what I mean! thank you Tim.
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Date: 3/23/2010 9:00:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much. I completely understand your point of view. If more people thought like his, perhaps the divorce rate i our country would be a little less. Great message.
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Date: 3/23/2010 8:53:00 AM
I love the message in your write - Thanks for a beautiful share Tim - A joy to read -:)
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