Wanting Love Forever

Some people stay together, some don’t even try
some just don’t know how to, some just don’t see why.
They don’t believe in love, because someone broke their hearts
now they say goodbye to love, before it even starts.


But we believe in Forever, loving like we do
giving love to each other, in the things we do.
Caring about each other, more than just ourselves
hands and hearts together, wanting love forever.


They wonder how we feel this way, after all the years
still in love with each other, with more laughter than there’s tears.
They find it hard, to believe, we can be this way
maybe they just never had, a love that came to stay.


But we believe in Forever, loving like we do
giving love to each other, in the things we do.
Caring about each other, more than just ourselves
hands and hearts together, wanting love forever.


Perhaps if they found someone, who could mend a broken heart
that very special someone, then they would never part.
They would be loved by someone, for more than just a day
then maybe too they would know, a love that came to stay.


And they’d believe in Forever, nothing else would do
giving love to each other, in the things they do.
Caring about each other, more than just themselves
hands and hearts together, wanting love forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Great love write....Glad that you have found love and you are willing to work at making it work...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Kitchen Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Thank you Amy, do you know where thank you messages like this can be put? or do you just put it here like I'm doing now if yoy see what I mean! thank you Tim.
Green Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 9:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much. I completely understand your point of view. If more people thought like his, perhaps the divorce rate i our country would be a little less. Great message.
Bathsheba Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 8:53 AM
I love the message in your write - Thanks for a beautiful share Tim - A joy to read -:)
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