Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Written 21st November 2024:

Waning Gibbous Moon Aglow

At start of darkening eventide
The skyline brings lustre to one's eyes
As sun is slipping away from sight
The sky is a picturesque delight.

Trees grace the illustrious sunset
In serene, ebony silhouette
Stately they are standing in tableau 
Against the radiant sunset show.

Time to let one's negative thoughts blow 
Forgetting one's sorrows and their woe
To complete tasks waiting to be done
Afore one's dreamy dreams have begun.

In ethereal nightly gloaming
Lovers everywhere are out roaming 
Beneath a magical starlit show 
With a waning gibbous moon aglow.

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Michael Tor November 25, 2024 at 3:11 PM Such beautiful imagery my friend. Really enjoyed reading this today. A favorite. Thank you for sharing... Beryl Edmonds November 25, 2024 at 3:39 PM Thank you so much Michael, I appreciate that very much indeed… Beryl

Ink Empress November 25, 2024 at 4:15 AM So dreamy and magical, i love this time of the day, that youv described in such a picturesque manner with exquisite rhymes and rhythm. I love the flow of your poem, especially “ Time to let one's negative thoughts blow Forgetting one's sorrows and their woe” yes sunsets do remind me that, especially the sky unfurls so much and passes messages to us, in a cosmic way: pleasure reading. Sending you light always Beryl Edmonds November 25, 2024 at 3:46 PM Dear Ink, thank you very much for your revue, it means a lot a lot truly. Sunset are poets delight, they’re an inspiration to write. Sending light to you in return… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar November 24, 2024 at 12:30 PM A stunning description. Sunset is always a marvel. Beryl Edmonds November 25, 2024 at 3:36 PM Thank you Victor, just love a beautiful sunset, they are glorious… Beryl

Daniel Turner November 22, 2024 at 12:56 PM Excellent read, Beryl. Sounds like a perfect evening:) Hoping you are well. Beryl Edmonds November 22, 2024 at 5:19 PM Thank you Daniel, I’ll feel better when my husband has recovered, he’s been very ill. Hope all is well with you… Beryl

John Read November 22, 2024 at 8:27 AM The sky is God's canvas, and our lord is the greatest artist of them all, love your poem sister Beryl. Beryl Edmonds November 22, 2024 at 10:14 AM Thank you brother John, God is a magnificent artist, He takes one's breath away… Sis Beryl

Victor Buhagiar November 22, 2024 at 3:27 AM How can one not admire your lovely poem accompanied by that beautiful scene? Your imagery is so beautiful. I miss dawn or sunset, as I am mostly confined indoors. Beryl Edmonds November 22, 2024 at 10:12 AM Thank you so much Victor, I get to see sunsets in winter from our window, in summertime, the best time, they’re not visable to us… Beryl

Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2024 at 2:24 AM - A beautiful poem...always impressive to look at, Beryl :) - hugs Beryl Edmonds November 22, 2024 at 10:06 AM Thank you Anne-Lise, sunsets and the moon never fail to impress… Hugs returned… Beryl

Tom Cunningham November 21, 2024 at 10:36 PM The sky is magical to see anytime of day and what's up there is always an inspiration. Tom Beryl Edmonds November 22, 2024 at 9:59 AM It certainly is Tom, I love to see a beautiful sunset, they’re one of the wonders of the sky… Beryl