Waning

The sound of water
rushing over fallen leaves...
Fall's fading moments.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Your Fall haiku is enlivened by beautiful imagery, George. Enjoyed! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Aul Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Thank you very much....... George
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 10:42 AM
The water soon to freeze, lovely haiku!
Aul Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Thanks for the comment......... George
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