Nette Onclaud Poet Quintain (English)

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Wandering Among Blooms

As I wander through hint of evergreen

My garden blushes with an opaque moonlight...

Till fireflies ride to embellish lush scene

Adorning jasmines, pebbles in sways bright

Unaware, heart dreary blooms on    frilled night!





8/3/2017
English Quintain, Any Theme, Write As If Doing
Theme At The Moment - For Sara Kendrick

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Sara Kendrick August 14, 2017 at 2:05 PM I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..I like this descriptive work a with little bit of a change in how you write and I like it..Congrats on your placement..Sara

Sunita U.D Palawon August 13, 2017 at 1:14 PM Beautiful imagery. A vivid picture and exciting one. Congrats! :) Sunita

Heidi Sands August 12, 2017 at 7:08 AM Congratulations for your win Nette :)

Joseph May August 11, 2017 at 8:06 PM Dropping back with my congrats

Paul Callus August 9, 2017 at 1:07 AM What beautiful imagery, Nette! You give life to the garden and your own feelings. Night has so much to offer! Hugs // paul

Joseph May August 5, 2017 at 10:12 AM Beautiful write Nette

Agnes Krampe August 3, 2017 at 10:05 PM Oh, lovely - I can see your garden in the moonlight.

Rhoma Em August 3, 2017 at 11:50 AM So soothing a view which can really lift any dreary heart. An outstanding poem!

Winged Warrior August 3, 2017 at 8:08 AM Your verse is blooming my friend...very sweet write nette...god bless...^WW^

Maria Williams August 3, 2017 at 4:40 AM Nette I love the way you write. Absolutely beautiful, all the best for the contest...Maria

Frederic Parker August 2, 2017 at 9:24 PM Nice path to walk poet...good luck

Russell Sivey August 2, 2017 at 9:09 PM I love Quintains when they are done right, and this one has been done more excellent! You inspire me every time I read one of your poems, you always have my friend! I love the line, "My garden blushes with an opaque moonlight" what a beautiful and sentimental line that one truly is! Great Work!!

Connie Marcum Wong August 2, 2017 at 8:28 PM A lovely poetic gift Nette! : )

Arthur Vaso August 2, 2017 at 2:01 PM So beautiful to see fireflies in the night!!! Lovely poem!

Charlie Smith August 2, 2017 at 1:09 PM Good entry Nette, best wishes,,,