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As I wander through hint of evergreen My garden blushes with an opaque moonlight... Till fireflies ride to embellish lush scene Adorning jasmines, pebbles in sways bright Unaware, heart dreary blooms on frilled night! 8/3/2017 English Quintain, Any Theme, Write As If Doing Theme At The Moment - For Sara Kendrick

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2017 2:05:00 PM

I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..I like this descriptive work a with little bit of a change in how you write and I like it..Congrats on your placement..Sara

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/13/2017 1:14:00 PM

Beautiful imagery. A vivid picture and exciting one. Congrats! :) Sunita

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/12/2017 7:08:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Nette :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/11/2017 8:06:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats

Paul Callus

Date: 8/9/2017 1:07:00 AM

What beautiful imagery, Nette! You give life to the garden and your own feelings. Night has so much to offer! Hugs // paul

Joseph May

Date: 8/5/2017 10:12:00 AM

Beautiful write Nette

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/3/2017 10:05:00 PM

Oh, lovely - I can see your garden in the moonlight.

Rhoma Em

Date: 8/3/2017 11:50:00 AM

So soothing a view which can really lift any dreary heart. An outstanding poem!

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/3/2017 8:08:00 AM

Your verse is blooming my friend...very sweet write nette...god bless...^WW^

Maria Williams

Date: 8/3/2017 4:40:00 AM

Nette I love the way you write. Absolutely beautiful, all the best for the contest...Maria

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/2/2017 9:24:00 PM

Nice path to walk poet...good luck

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/2/2017 9:09:00 PM

I love Quintains when they are done right, and this one has been done more excellent! You inspire me every time I read one of your poems, you always have my friend! I love the line, "My garden blushes with an opaque moonlight" what a beautiful and sentimental line that one truly is! Great Work!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/2/2017 8:28:00 PM

A lovely poetic gift Nette! : )

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/2/2017 2:01:00 PM

So beautiful to see fireflies in the night!!! Lovely poem!

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/2/2017 1:09:00 PM

Good entry Nette, best wishes,,,