Vijay Pandit Poet Haiku

Waltzing Lilac Winds

golden beams of dawn
are glinting amber prairies--
smiles of daffodils

enchanting day break
are red, white, purple tulips--
pride of early spring

waltzing lilac winds
charm violet hyacinth--
gems on windowsills

June 4, 2020
Placed 1st: Fresh Traditional Haiku by JCB Burl
Placed 2nd: Brian's Select 5 Contest

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Angela Crabtree October 23, 2020 at 9:13 AM Wonderful Haiku, Vijay. Purple tulips are beautiful :)

Brandy Nicole June 9, 2020 at 1:47 PM The wind, arranges and rearranges the many colors of spring. Your thoughts bring these moments to life. This is beautiful in every way. I am smiling. Embracing the magic of the season. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit June 9, 2020 at 4:07 PM Always a pleasure to read your feedback--much appreciate, Brandy--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2020 at 6:20 AM I love tulips! A charming haiku! Vijay Pandit June 9, 2020 at 9:04 AM Much appreciate Kim--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel June 8, 2020 at 12:01 AM Love your choice of words and the beautiful imagery, Vijay:) double congratulations on your win:) Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:30 PM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Arturo Michael June 7, 2020 at 7:49 PM Nice imagery, done I believe, in a Haiku style...It could actually continue a bit longer...Well done Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:29 PM Much appreciate Arturo--there was limit of just three--many thanks.

L. J. Carber June 7, 2020 at 10:30 AM Congrats Vijay on your win! Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:29 PM Thank you L J--much appreciate.

JC Brul June 7, 2020 at 9:07 AM Ah, what an enchanting imagery! Congrats! Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:28 PM Appreciate the visit and comments--thanks for hosting contests...many thanks, JCB.

Paul Callus June 7, 2020 at 7:57 AM Nature's colourful delight becomes our delight, Vijay! No wonder this made its way to the winners' list...congratulations! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:27 PM Much appreciate Paul--many thanks. Regards.

Heidi Sands June 7, 2020 at 7:35 AM Beautiful and so pleasant to read today Vijay! :) Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:27 PM Thank you Heidi--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose June 7, 2020 at 6:31 AM You make me want to draw closer and inhale the perfume of your thoughts Vijay. Have a beautiful day, hugs and prayers . Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:27 PM Much appreciate your kind remarks my friend--many thanks, Vienna.

Jenish Somadas June 7, 2020 at 5:10 AM Wonderful imagery Vijay.. Congrats on your win.. Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:26 PM Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.

Sandra Adams June 6, 2020 at 9:32 PM the images in this one are gorgeous...I am in love with the title to this piece too my friend... wonderful penning with great imagery! hugs Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:26 PM So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Joseph May June 6, 2020 at 8:45 PM Beautiful depiction of springtime beauty Vijay.. Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:25 PM Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Jeanne Mcgee June 6, 2020 at 6:48 PM such a lovely haiku! waltzing lilac winds charm violet hyacinth...two of my favorites. Congrats on this win and also the Haiku win...wonderful my friend. Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 2:24 PM Thank you Jeanne--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos June 6, 2020 at 11:22 AM Imagery phenomenal - poetry suberb and congrats well desesrved. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit June 6, 2020 at 2:29 PM Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra June 6, 2020 at 10:51 AM Amber prairies, purple tulips, lilac wind...what a beautiful painting I just witnessed. Congratulations on your splendid win Vijay :) Vijay Pandit June 6, 2020 at 2:28 PM Thank you Aditi--much appreciate.

Silent One June 6, 2020 at 9:26 AM Your own is on fire.... Full of wonderful imagery and creative writing .. Vijay Pandit June 6, 2020 at 2:28 PM So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Jan Allison June 6, 2020 at 6:59 AM a floral delight Vijay I especially love the final stanza, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Vijay Pandit June 6, 2020 at 2:27 PM Thank you Jan for your visit and kind remarks--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2020 at 5:41 PM this is one of my favorites of the haiku sets I have seen. So lovely! Vijay Pandit June 6, 2020 at 2:27 PM So nice to hear Andrea--especially from you. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2020 at 4:17 PM - Like a beautiful spring song ... best wishes in the contest, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit June 5, 2020 at 5:20 PM Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Harry Horsman June 5, 2020 at 9:40 AM Three gems here Vijay..love them all. Vijay Pandit June 5, 2020 at 11:47 AM Thank you Harry--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 5, 2020 at 4:20 AM Nature's symphony resonates in your Haiku dearest, Vijay! Blessings Vijay Pandit June 5, 2020 at 7:18 AM So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 4, 2020 at 10:06 PM Beautiful, floral imagery, Vijay! I can almost smell the sweet flowers. Best of luck in the contest...hugs, Rhonda Vijay Pandit June 5, 2020 at 7:18 AM Delighted by your visit and comments, Rhonda. Much appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2020 at 8:46 PM So many do not understand the art of haiku Vijay. I can tell you have studied haiku. These are outstanding and sing of spring! Just gorgeous my friend! Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit June 5, 2020 at 7:17 AM So appreciate your vote of approval my friend--many thanks Connie for the kind feedback.

Mystic Rose Rose June 4, 2020 at 8:36 PM I love the way you danced the lilacs in, haiku by haiku. Well done dear Vijay, keep well, xo Vijay Pandit June 5, 2020 at 7:16 AM Much appreciate Vienna--many thanks.

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