Waltz

step back step forward
love magnet pulls and holds hearts
circling around tight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Sounds like love to me Frances. An apt depiction of the give and take, dance of love, beautifully expressed with lovely imagery. I love your title too - wonderful! Warmest wishes! ~Susan
Pandit Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 2:27 PM
A wonderful dance...depicted in lovely words.
Michael Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Very imaginative...All the best Frances
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