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Waltz


 Waves moving following the beat of the sea.
 Anxious to conquer the shores
 to claim for calm.
 Languid they touch our feet making us dancing~
 Turning in and out, the waves 
 follow the rhythm of our feet.
 Zest sea blown by our mind 
 on the life's dance
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Rolland Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 4:30 PM
this is subtle and delicious, i couldn't have imag.ine a dance like this, thanks a lot Maria for inspiring me this thirsday yann
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 12:37 AM
Thank you so much my friend. Have a great dayxxx
Buhagiar Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 12:17 AM
A waltz a day keeps the doctor away. To be young again and waltz through your fantastic poem.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 12:53 AM
Good morning Victor. Very cold morning here with frost. A waltz a day, as the apple, sometimes it helps. Lovely comment for starting the day. Thank you so much my dear friend. Have a great weekxxx
Poet Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 4:16 PM
You have made a really nice poem, where the first letter of each line spells out a special word. Your word choice is excellent and you have used it in a great way. I hope you have a fantastic weekend, dear Maria!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 4:28 PM
My dear friend you give me so much with your lovely words. Have a a nice weekend tooxxx
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