Waltz

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Waves moving following the beat of the sea. Anxious to conquer the shores to claim for calm. Languid they touch our feet making us dancing~ Turning in and out, the waves follow the rhythm of our feet. Zest sea blown by our mind on the life's dance

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Yann Rolland

Date: 1/10/2024 4:30:00 PM

this is subtle and delicious, i couldn't have imag.ine a dance like this, thanks a lot Maria for inspiring me this thirsday yann

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/11/2024 12:37:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend. Have a great dayxxx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/8/2024 12:17:00 AM

A waltz a day keeps the doctor away. To be young again and waltz through your fantastic poem.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/8/2024 12:53:00 AM

Good morning Victor. Very cold morning here with frost. A waltz a day, as the apple, sometimes it helps. Lovely comment for starting the day. Thank you so much my dear friend. Have a great weekxxx

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/5/2024 4:16:00 PM

You have made a really nice poem, where the first letter of each line spells out a special word. Your word choice is excellent and you have used it in a great way. I hope you have a fantastic weekend, dear Maria!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/5/2024 4:28:00 PM

My dear friend you give me so much with your lovely words. Have a a nice weekend tooxxx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/5/2024 3:29:00 PM

a beautiful and splendidly crated Acrostic. I've always liked the word 'waltz' and you've used it magnificently. Have a wonderful weekend, dear Maria! hugs, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/5/2024 4:11:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend