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Wallowing In Grief

Staring with swollen eyes from a park bench, he lights up a joint as puffs turn into smoke, and with breath smelling of Johnny Walker, and a face so dirty, it attracts an onlooker who shouts, " Pity yourself, nobody cares! " He laughs at him if he were telling a crazy joke, " With a fat belly like that you seem a teddy bear! " the drunken guy fight back emitting a belch. This October afternoon is quite chilly, some folks stroll and drink coffee, the Hot Dog stand resembles a chimney as the hungry man drools smelling beef, but all is wants is more whiskey not to feel rejected and wallow in grief.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/24/2013 3:50:00 PM
Having struggled with addiction and alcoholism myself, I connected to this piece immediately. Great write and read that really hit home for me :)
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