Len Gasun Poet Lyric

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Walking With You Tonight

Walking With You Tonight
(poem /song)

In my dreams tonight oh, baby
I am walking with you on the clouds
Holding me tight in your arms
And I wish I will never wake up
With your warm and loving touch

We're dancing together in the starlight
As we walk together in my dreams tonight

I feel your love entirely on my being
Your tenderness and sweet caress
Getting me out from the darkness
With all the loneliness I feel
You wipe them all, my tears and fears

I am walking with you tonight
In my dreams I feel alright
You’re releasing all my pains
Allowing me to see a new sunlight
As I walk lovingly with you tonight

You’re giving me enough courage to go on
In all my hopes and dreams
I’m dancing with you baby in the starlight
As I walk with you tonight

We’re dancing together in the starlight
As we walk together in my dreams tonight.



Oct. 23,2012



Note:
 This song was composed but not entered in any contest before. I just wrote it for me & my loving granddad (musician) to put melody when we've time to be together. However, I decided to enter it now for Song Lyric Contest of my dear poet friend, Anne Currin.

Thirteenth Place
Contest: Song Lyrics
Judged: 7/13/13
Sponsor: Poet Anne Currin

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Skat A July 18, 2013 at 10:53 PM Hi Leonora, , Anne, has nice taste ..... congrats with your Song Lyrics entry... love~ SKAT

Connie Gildersleeve July 15, 2013 at 10:06 AM Lenora thank you for sharing your fabulous lyric. I hope you get to put it to music. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2013 at 6:08 PM :-) Hello my dearest sis... stopping by to say hi, and make sure you are doing well... I am glad Anne, enjoyed what you send her.... congrats... hugs and more hugs... love..LINDA

Bl Devnath July 14, 2013 at 11:46 AM Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Donna Jones July 14, 2013 at 8:15 AM Leonora this is very beautiful and I love the sentiment behind it....congratulations

Richard Lamoureux July 14, 2013 at 8:12 AM Well done congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich July 14, 2013 at 12:02 AM Leonora, I'm glad to see this one on another winners' list. BIG congrats. It's precious.

Harry Horsman November 20, 2012 at 10:47 AM i can whistle a tune for this, that's the best i can do.. awesome poem, deserves being a song..........

Erich Goller October 30, 2012 at 12:40 PM that's a beautiful and romantic expressed poem, nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2012 at 4:11 PM gosh, it's so pretty, it sure seems like it belongs in the contest, Leonora. and gosh, I did not even know you had a contest going on with YOUR busy schedule!! wow!

Bukang Liwayway October 24, 2012 at 10:49 AM another great piece from you friend Norie...two thumbs up!!! I like it!! keep it up! mwuah!!!!!!!!!!!!!(^_^)

Carol Sunshine Brown October 24, 2012 at 7:36 AM A wonderful piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading today Leonora. Love, Carol

Lucilla Carrillo October 23, 2012 at 9:32 PM This is very, very beautiful, to walk with the one you love on the clouds. Thanks for sharing and good night. Lucilla

Poet Destroyer A October 23, 2012 at 8:54 PM stopping by to tell you good night Sisie-pooh.... nite nite....zzzzzzzzzzz... see you in the morning...PD Len Gasun October 23, 2012 at 8:59 PM good night sisie-pooh. thank you so much for reading my song.

Tim Ryerson October 23, 2012 at 7:50 PM This will make a lovely song, Leonora...the ending chorus is a knockout!...Might I suggest inserting the chorus between the 2nd and 3rd verse as well? - Tim Len Gasun October 23, 2012 at 9:01 PM Your suggestion is highly appreciated Tim. I did right away what you've suggested. thank you so much!

Joann Grisetti October 23, 2012 at 6:28 PM Lovely dreaming dance, you have a way with words, passionate and romantic. Len Gasun October 23, 2012 at 9:02 PM thank you so much Joann.

Poet Destroyer A October 23, 2012 at 5:16 PM hi....Leo, how are you sisie-pooh,,,, I'm glad you have something new and dreamy for me to read.... Besides your soup-mail..LOL... which I will go and read in a few minutes..I had to attack this poem first.. About your poem: Only in a dram can we dream of love the way it should be and feel... you are a dreamer of light. your song is lovely, and you sure know how hold a hand.. always...your #1 fan..xox...pd Len Gasun October 23, 2012 at 9:06 PM Thank you so much my dear sisie. This is my first time that I'm quite serious to compose a song. The other one wasn't successful with the melody, lol. Hope this one will work. Million thanks! love, Leonora, your sisie-pooh.

Michael J. Falotico October 23, 2012 at 5:04 PM I like this very much. My goal also is to be a songwriter. But I love poetry. Best of luck to you. Michael