Walking Under Water

enchanting journey;
beauty on river's
floor
feeds my soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Have yourself a wonderful night... PD
Kimathi Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 5:12 AM
Good morning Linda. Lol.
A   Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 4:48 PM
:) :) :) PD
Kimathi Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 11:10 AM
^_^*************^_^
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 4:32 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - Well done, I like it Teddy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kimathi Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 2:31 AM
Thank you Anne Lise! ^_^
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 10:57 PM
a soothing thought. Congrats for your win
Kimathi Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 2:29 AM
Thanks Andrea! ^_^
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Beautiful Haiku Teddy. Congratulations.
Kimathi Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 2:26 AM
Thanks for your applause Brenda! ^_^
Sietesantos Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations, Teddy on a fine win! Excellent inspirational Haiku. Pandita
Kimathi Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 2:26 AM
I really appreciate your kind applause Pandita! ^_^
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 7:06 AM
congrats on your win Teddy:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 2:19 AM
Thank you so much for your applause Jan! ^_^
Mehta Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 5:17 AM
Congrats on this fine win, Teddy
Kimathi Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 2:18 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
A   Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 11:23 PM
Teddy,. Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Kimathi Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 3:48 AM
Thanks Linda, for your kind applause and featuring my work in your blog! ^_^ Love, Teddy.
A   Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 12:46 PM
Yes, I' watch TV all day...LOL
Kimathi Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Lolest..... What kind of shows?
A   Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 11:32 AM
I don't work
Kimathi Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 4:07 AM
.........but you do something, right?
A   Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 11:48 AM
I'm still here, bored, watching TV, it's 11:47 am right now...LOL... a few hours later... PD
Kimathi Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 9:14 AM
Lol. What job do you do?
A   Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 10:37 AM
it is 10:36 am here... Linda
Kimathi Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Wow! What are you doing now?
A   Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 9:35 AM
have a nice day
Kimathi Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 10:22 AM
Have a nice day too. It is almost 7 in the evening here....
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:45 AM
The title caught me..:) beautiful imagery..:)
Kimathi Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 4:10 AM
Thanks Olive! ^_^ <3
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 9:25 PM
TEddy, do you always write two line haiku? They are nice little poems but be careful in contests of haiku if you enter. this particular one reminds me of the song A Horse With No Name. Where the guy ends up under the ground and all the beauty is like an ocean under the desert!
Kimathi Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 6:50 AM
Hahaha. You have a good sense of humor Andrea! :-) Yes, sometimes I write two line haiku......
A   Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 10:16 AM
Teddy, Thank You For replying to my comment :) LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 6:47 AM
Welcome Linda! ^_^
A   Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 8:57 PM
Teddy, nicely done... Makes me wonder if it is for my contest...LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 6:28 AM
Hahaha.... You mean it's that nice?! TEDDY.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace