Walking On Broken Glass - C-Y-S

She stared at stars
through tear drops
While she wished for
days gone by
She asked love to
take her back
Put the sun back
in blue sky

9-1-19
Contest: Four Lines of Melodic Poetry
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chiri Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 4:46 PM
This was so lovely! Congrats on your placement!;)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 10:10 PM
So poetic and sweet! Nice job!
Bradfield Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 10:31 PM
thank you, Caren!!
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