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Walking Flowers....

Her scented perfume
another flower with toes,
as I bend to breeze....

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Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2011 at 9:38 PM

congrats in advancing in the soup contest with your senryu!

Sara Kendrick

March 11, 2011 at 1:54 PM

So romantic a work.Congratulations on coming through first round..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 9, 2011 at 5:34 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The very best to you in the finals Jay. Love Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

March 6, 2011 at 6:50 PM

Well done, Jay! Congrats on being selected in the Poetry soup Nov. 22, 2010 contest! Caroline.

Daver Austin

February 23, 2011 at 10:45 AM

Nice ballet. Congrats on the selection. daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 21, 2011 at 1:11 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Jay. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

February 21, 2011 at 9:33 AM

Congrats Jay on the feature. Vince

Lucinda Bulger

April 23, 2009 at 9:21 AM

hmmmmm... :), ya know I didn't comment on this one before, you know I absolutely love this one, I put it in my favs after I talked to you and u posted this one. I am really glad you got the recognition u did with it. It is very well conveyed, and u will always b a bit mysterious to me because of my own personal take on things,but that's OK :) Lots of love always, Lucinda

Sue Mason

September 18, 2008 at 11:34 AM

Awesome, incredible write as always Jay !! Congratulations on simplicity at its most elegant and to the PoetrySoup reviewers who recognize such talent.

Sharon Winter

September 15, 2008 at 7:03 AM

Congrats dearest Jay on a most well deserved featured write. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

September 15, 2008 at 6:17 AM

Jay congrats on having your poem featured this week

Vince Suzadail Jr.

September 15, 2008 at 5:34 AM

Hey!! Congratulations Jay on "Walking Flowers" being featured. God Bless. Vince

September 13, 2008 at 5:56 PM

What a nice thought. Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. It is a day brightener. Keep on writing. Karen

Michael Jordan

September 12, 2008 at 7:55 PM

Thats right Jay - Very cleaver indeed - I want to thank you for your comment Jay regarding my blog - Means a lot to me - Words I'll never forget - God Bless you my friend