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....Walking Corpses....

The sun bearing down, taking aim Taking, with its hot scorching flame Walking corpses, looking for shade ~ A life for a Soul, soon they'll trade A Soul for a life.... The beginning of their pain!? Choking on ashes, upon invisible plates Porcelain castles, with a storm on the way ~ On the way to their ashes, the end of their daze The Sun bearing down.... And taking aim; taking, the turning Of their turning away; away?! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ....“Walking Corpses” ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/11/2012 5:14:00 PM
Loved this one. Chillingly delightful! Always, Laura
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Date: 2/1/2012 2:43:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed..Creative one indeed..Cotton Candy so very sweet but one with diabetes can not eat..Sara
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