Walking Backwards

I look backwards I look forward
I look all around
I look left and right
chaos is all to be found

someone at this second is murdered 
someone at this second is raped
just watching the news 
makes me want to pray

you cant park your car on the street anymore 
you can't go out at night
you can't walk down the road anymore
alone in broad daylight

this world should be moving forwards
and not backwards anymore
people need to be more nice
and bring more love and less war 

how hard is it to pay excuse me
rubbing shoulders'walking by?
being nice is so easy to do
people need to give it a try

the government saying 
what we can or can not do
America used to be free
but that is no longer true

a child rapist is charged again
then he was set free
while ppl sit in jail for unpaid fines
that sounds backwards to me

punishing everyone with guns
because of one person's psychotic act
...it's not the gun it's the person
everyone with common sense knows that

registered sex offenders as our neighbors- man what a relief
the law says they've paid their dues 
but that's just what they want to believe

people being shot all around
because the color of their face
I believe everyone should be loved
no matter what the race

people all over struggling
not enough money for bills to be paid
I think this country is going under
too many changes to be made

oil spills, chemical factories 
and the ocean is filled with trash
at this rate 50 years from now
this world will be ash

it takes so much energy to hate 
I wish everyone could see
life would go more smoothly
if you do unselfish deeds 

when you see someone struggling 
offer a hand to help
if the tables were turned 
wouldn't you want that for yourself?

there are many things you can't change
but try hard at the things you can
you have a special place in this world
you are part of a bigger plan

part of the plan to take our lives back
part of the plan to do what's right
part of the plan to walk safely
down the street in the day or night

I was taught to hold on to love
and I should never hate 
together everyone could turn this around
it is never too late

it's time to take one step forward 
and no longer take any back
this country, this world, our children's' future is at stake
and that is a fact

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/16/2015 12:15:00 AM
Jamie, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:21:00 PM
Jamie:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:57:00 PM
Jamie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/8/2015 5:28:00 AM
Jamie,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with your New Poet Friend! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/7/2015 2:27:00 PM
Seems like that prayer you're saying in your other piece is connected to these thoughts, and well intended.
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Date: 3/7/2015 11:36:00 AM
- Welcome to P Soup, with your first poem Jamie - Always nice to meet new "poets" - I look forward to more write from you in the future - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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