Walking Back...
.c.A Shack Concrete
Walking back
To
The
shack concrete
(...a reference to bad poetry)
notice
a non-hurricane-ravaged
[moping]palm
-actually
an intrusive
propagated stuck
in black
-brick-holed
date palm.
tepid steam
type
dive tank
bottom waiting
to see
if
it works
shadows
-frigate-bird
over head
visit
through reef
softened wave
-come up
party of
bubbles
-I'm in
my own
drink .
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