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Walking Away

Walking Away
 
You believed I’d always need to stay.
You never thought I’d walk away.
But you’re wrong, for I’ve grown strong.
I’m never looking back.
I’m burning this bridge,
so you’ll know that
there’s no us…
only
me.


12-15-2015

Contest:      Walking Away
Sponsor:     Silent One
Placement:  2nd


Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/18/2017 7:07:00 AM
A very powerful write. Just those 9 short lines sum up so much emotion and reveal a snippet of the story behind the story. Congratulations on your win.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 2/18/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, dear John, for your continued support and kind words. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 1/14/2016 11:20:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 1/14/2016 11:58:00 AM
Hi Funom, thank you, my friend, for all your support and kind compliments which always mean the world to me! Pandita
Date: 1/14/2016 6:28:00 AM
very cool...
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 1/14/2016 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, LL! I appreciate your wonderful compliment! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/17/2015 3:21:00 PM
Pandita, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/17/2015 6:13:00 PM
Hi Skat, I am so happy you like this one - many thanks for your kind congratulations! Pandita
Date: 12/17/2015 1:21:00 AM
You're burning the bridge so that they'll know that there's no us... only me. This is a master piece. I've always heard "don't burn the bridge" Well you made a believer out of me, some people never need to cross over again.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/17/2015 6:13:00 PM
Hi Lara, thank you for stopping by and leaving your insightful comments and great compliments! I really appreciate it all! Pandita
Date: 12/16/2015 6:20:00 PM
Powerful poem, Pandita. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/16/2015 7:01:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend, for your continued support and kind words. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/16/2015 5:39:00 PM
Fine win my friend. So sad that some women have not that great strength and suffer from the abuse from some bad guys. Congrats on this win...
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/16/2015 6:57:00 PM
Hi Robert, thank you, my friend, for all your support and kind compliments which always mean the world to me! Pandita
Date: 12/16/2015 2:29:00 PM
Simple strong message and well written.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/16/2015 7:00:00 PM
Dear Stuart, what a lovely compliment! Thank you so much for the super encouragement which mean a lot to me! Pandita
Date: 12/16/2015 10:27:00 AM
Pandita congratulations on a well deserved win!!!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/16/2015 7:01:00 PM
Hi Michael, I appreciate your wonderful compliments. Thank you, my friend! Pandita
Date: 12/16/2015 5:44:00 AM
An excellent, strong nonet, Pandita. T.J
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/16/2015 6:56:00 PM
Hi T.J., I appreciate your wonderful compliments. Thank you, my friend! Pandita
Date: 12/16/2015 12:33:00 AM
Excellent. Sad but your courage is shown well. Thanks for sharing it
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/16/2015 6:52:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Ravi, for your wonderful compliments as usual! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/15/2015 7:57:00 PM
well done, you let him know you are strong.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/16/2015 6:53:00 PM
Hi Casarah, I always appreciate receiving your kind words and compliments. Thank you so much! Pandita
Date: 12/15/2015 7:46:00 PM
Pandita, this is indeed a very powerful piece. It takes a lot of courage to leave a relationship especially a toxic one! Excellent Nonet! Good luck in the contest and a 7 for a write that is well done! Kika
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/16/2015 6:54:00 PM
My dear Kika, thank you so much for your welcomed compliments and high score! Pandita