Walking a Tightrope

Walking a tightrope     High above the crowd     Faces below me     Shouting out loud      Come here go there     Directions all about    My once certainty     Has now become my doubt     Lost my way     Let all my demons in     A blinding arrogance     Appears to be my sin    Never took heed     Always went my own way     Closed my ears     To all the words people say     Need to keep my balance    Can`t let go now   Very difficult task     Seems I forgot how     Feel myself slipping    Into the crowd below     No safety net in sight     To cushion the blow    Before I hit     Will my arms sprout wings     Will know very soon     What my future brings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 3:08 PM
Congrats on your interesting winning work..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 6:00 PM
a pensive write Richard congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles
Ferry Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 9:48 PM
thank you
A   Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 1:58 PM
Richard, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA
Ferry Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 9:49 PM
good to hear from you
Fisher Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 1:24 PM
I like the built up suspense and the layout of the poem.
Ferry Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 10:21 PM
glad I kept your attention
Palli Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 10:46 AM
Very good indeed! Liked the format.
Ferry Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 10:22 PM
thanks
Rhinehart Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 11:28 PM
Good job!
Ferry Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 10:20 PM
thanks
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