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Walking a Tightrope

Walking a tightrope High above the crowd Faces below me Shouting out loud Come here go there Directions all about My once certainty Has now become my doubt Lost my way Let all my demons in A blinding arrogance Appears to be my sin Never took heed Always went my own way Closed my ears To all the words people say Need to keep my balance Can`t let go now Very difficult task Seems I forgot how Feel myself slipping Into the crowd below No safety net in sight To cushion the blow Before I hit Will my arms sprout wings Will know very soon What my future brings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/30/2013 3:08:00 PM
Congrats on your interesting winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/27/2013 6:00:00 PM
a pensive write Richard congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles
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Richard Ferry
Date: 7/28/2013 9:48:00 PM
thank you
Date: 7/27/2013 1:58:00 PM
Richard, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA
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Richard Ferry
Date: 7/28/2013 9:49:00 PM
good to hear from you
Date: 3/7/2013 1:24:00 PM
I like the built up suspense and the layout of the poem.
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Richard Ferry
Date: 3/9/2013 10:21:00 PM
glad I kept your attention
Date: 3/7/2013 10:46:00 AM
Very good indeed! Liked the format.
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Richard Ferry
Date: 3/9/2013 10:22:00 PM
thanks
Date: 3/6/2013 11:28:00 PM
Good job!
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Richard Ferry
Date: 3/9/2013 10:20:00 PM
thanks

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