Walking

I'm walking and walking 
The journey of a mortal
So I struggled but this just the beginning 
These a door ahead
An adventure awaits me 
The wind speaks
The sky is watching 
I'm moving and moving with the spiral of life,
Dancing to the music played by the source 
The composer in the background,
So I walk, walking around invisible tracks 
Like a train track so i move first
Dodging every obstacles 
Cause my movements are planned,
And people who be hating 
Are waiting for me to stop
Like this train has many stations to go,
Moving freely, feeling all powerful  
Like im invincible, man the delusion im in
But this is me transcending   
Growing my intuition,
Like a computer upgrading its system.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Mcintosh  Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 6:30 AM
Wonderful piece of writing Liam. I found the mixture of imagery and metaphors to be really revealing of your view and your experience. I connected a lot with the idea. I hope you have a lovely day
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