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Walking

I'm walking and walking The journey of a mortal So I struggled but this just the beginning These a door ahead An adventure awaits me The wind speaks The sky is watching I'm moving and moving with the spiral of life, Dancing to the music played by the source The composer in the background, So I walk, walking around invisible tracks Like a train track so i move first Dodging every obstacles Cause my movements are planned, And people who be hating Are waiting for me to stop Like this train has many stations to go, Moving freely, feeling all powerful Like im invincible, man the delusion im in But this is me transcending Growing my intuition, Like a computer upgrading its system.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/16/2017 6:30:00 AM
Wonderful piece of writing Liam. I found the mixture of imagery and metaphors to be really revealing of your view and your experience. I connected a lot with the idea. I hope you have a lovely day
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