Walking

I walk these dreams, these glittering
stardust paths. Gentle of foot upon
wishes strewn before my step, amidst
the stars and moonbeams golden bars
I seek salvation for this heart. I know
my answer is here, near, the glittering
of a star away, for it is here that angels
sing their songs and words trip from
giving tongues. Echoes of her name
wrap and enfold, ever pulling me
onwards. Onwards to that celestial 
seat and be ever at her side, where
dreams are realized and the heart is 
bathed in the milk of love. Where
time is of no significance, and only
the fruitfulness of feeling fills the
soul. Onwards I journey for I know
she waits, every step in poetry, this 
heart has no constrates.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Clark Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Pick me up off the floor........... J
Owens Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 2:04 PM
Wow...I haven't had much of a chance to read any poetry lately but glad I chose this one...Enjoyed...Marty
Devonshire Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 6:27 PM
You always take us on such beautiful journeys with your words, Daniel. Stardust paths, moonbeams and the milk of love give us such uplifting images. You have quite a spiritual side when, added to your romantic nature, makes you a remarkable man, Daniel. Hope spring comes soon to the northern parts of France and that you will soon find flowers along the path as you walk your dogs. Love, Carolyn
Smith Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 2:52 PM
this poem was just plain beautiful i am a major sucker for some imagery and man i have to say you delivered! a perfect write! Jo
Lusha Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Gosh I shouldn't read your poetry when I am supposed to be working...it just takes me to a wonderful place and I don't want to come back!....Thank you for your kind words always.....Allie
Burton Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 1:02 AM
Every time I read you you get more and more deeper. I enjoyed your flow of words here and also your stlye. Enjoy your night or morning:)
Strand Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 12:05 AM
Some excellent phrasing in this one Daniel.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 4:41 PM
Bathed in the milk of love.. romantic words Daniel and a pleasure to read this sensational poetry tonight... I so appreciate your wonderful comments and well wishes for my son... very menaingful to me as a Mom... thankxxx..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Palli Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 12:21 PM
Lovely journey
Chircop Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Hope your star never stops its glitter..,,This pen of yours never stops its shine..beautiful Daniel..Charma
Culverhouse Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 10:54 AM
enjoyed reading today, thanks for the comments.
Pickett Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 10:06 AM
Whats up big Cheese!!! I enjoyed your poem today my friend... Keep em comin'....:JP]
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 9:57 AM
Great dream paths that you are treading very gently. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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