Walking

step to the ground
freedom is found
pace picks up
i wonder what to think of
i have so much time
though i still wonder why
street names pass me
do they see what i see
pavement changes shades of gray
they listen to every word i have to say
wish they knew where i was going
your memory behind me..flowing
still my curiosity is overtaken
the night is over soon for morning to awaken
my mind still is left alone
by myself to walk home
i wish i actually knew where that was
i would go there wanting all the hugs
love is such a mess leaving me all over the place
i am asking for the only thing that could help me..grace
well you never did help me get to where i had been
people wonder and i know you do to why your not the one i belive in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/6/2009 4:09:00 PM
Interesting thoughts on lost love. Sara
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:57:00 PM
Hi Autumn What a lovely name. Enjoyed reading your heartfelt poem today. So honest, real. Good job! Keep writing, look forward to reading more of your thought provoking poety. Take care sweet, Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:40:00 PM
Thanks for sharing, enjoyed reading, Sincerely Moses
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