Krish Radhakrishna Poet Senryu

Walk the Talk

cheat husband sleep talked
named mistresses all night long
saved by her sleep walk

5,7,5
4th placement
written 11/Jan/2021
Tania Kitchin sponsor
Senryu humorous or dark competition

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Mark Koplin January 15, 2021 at 5:28 AM Congratulations on your win, Krish! Krish Radhakrishna January 15, 2021 at 5:30 AM Thanks Mark! a different kind of humour! no toilets involved!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2021 at 3:44 AM - Congratulations on your great win, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Krish Radhakrishna January 15, 2021 at 3:55 AM Thanks Anne Lise!

Line Gauthier January 14, 2021 at 6:56 PM ouch ~ good one, Krish Krish Radhakrishna January 15, 2021 at 3:55 AM Thanks Line! a lucky husband!

Jan Allison January 14, 2021 at 4:00 PM Dropping back with many congrats Krish:-) hugs jan xx Krish Radhakrishna January 14, 2021 at 11:34 PM Thank you Jan!

Brian Sambourne January 14, 2021 at 2:15 PM Very funny + clever. A true winner. Cheers, Brian Krish Radhakrishna January 14, 2021 at 2:59 PM Thanks Brian!

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2021 at 1:20 PM Congrats on your win, Krish. Krish Radhakrishna January 14, 2021 at 1:36 PM Thanks Andrea! Cheers!

Tania Kitchin January 14, 2021 at 12:18 PM Krish, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever poem! Krish Radhakrishna January 14, 2021 at 12:43 PM Thanks Tania. Thanks for the fun contest.

Jan Allison January 11, 2021 at 8:40 AM oh gosh great satire here Krish :-) hugs jan xx Krish Radhakrishna January 11, 2021 at 10:57 AM Thanks Jan!