Walk Slowly

Go out and reach the sky~
let your wings flap and fly high,
soar in the clouds and ride the rainbow,
but remember not to touch the sun.

Walk barefooted and explore the fields ~
dance with the bees and the butterflies
sway with the blooms~ sing with the birds!
but never pluck the petals nor  capture tiny creatures.
                
Climb the mountains and keep ascending~
But remember no matter how high  
your feet still mounted on the ground;
Keep your ideals high but your spirit nigh.


Fall in love- get enchanted in a dream~
But never break a sterling heart,
nor you attempt to bring to eyes a tear,
for it has the power to sink a ship.

Walk on, walk slowly~
Remember you are just a traveller
and the roads ahead are yet unseen;
Handle yourself with fervent prayers
for bridges are sometimes fragile.

Walk on, walk slowly~
Stop and pause at every crossroad;
Each turning point, each bend and curb
will only be travelled but once~
Walk on, walk slowly.

December 12, 2020
For "Your Advice To The Youth Poetry Contest"
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh
2nd place

Entered for "All Yours (May 18) Poetry Contest"
Sponsored by Brian Strand
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Kauffman Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:34 AM
In their headlong rush to maturity, your words to "walk on - walk slowly" are truly impactful JCB! This reminds me of taking walks with our boys when they were toddlers who took joy in sidewalk cracks and dandelions. So wonderful to see this on the winners list. Congratulations! Blessings to you.
Alex Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 5:04 AM
Good Write. Congratulations!
Koplin Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on your win, JCB!
Logan Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 3:32 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, JCB
Ibeh Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 11:49 AM
A fantastic poem with a beautiful message for the youths of today, JCB:-) Congratulations on your well-deserved win in my contest!
Mcintosh Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 4:01 AM
I so love this! It's a true I N S P I R A T I O N! A joy to partake of. God Bless you with a win.
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