Walk Out the Door

To wait and to suffer is what I'll do no more.

The pain is starting to intensify so I'm walking out the door.

You left me alone in a self deepening hole.

I finally clawed my way out, I accomplished my goal.

I will always be here for you, but this part of me must go.

I refuse to just watch this side of me reach its all time low.

Unconditional love is what I'll always have for you,

But just please understand that this getaway is overdue.

Maybe in time you and I can create a flame once more,

But until that day comes, I must walk out the door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 8/29/2013 1:39:00 PM
I've shut several doors in my life. But, damn do my newly opened windows bring in such a nice breeze! =D I feel your honest lines here. Excellent!
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Date: 8/27/2013 2:07:00 AM
NICE AND PRETTY POEM...........@%#%#@
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Date: 8/26/2013 1:48:00 AM
intense...
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Date: 8/24/2013 12:25:00 PM
Hi Maricel, Nice write and very straight forward... Regards, Ken..
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Date: 8/24/2013 12:09:00 PM
Sad when we have to walk in the other direction or are just stuck watching the distance grow. It's hard saying it's a nice poem, knowing the consequences that lead to this type of inspiration, but you have written it well. Good work
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Date: 8/24/2013 7:10:00 AM
Nicely done Maricel.
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Date: 8/24/2013 2:40:00 AM
SOOOOOO NICEEEEEEEEEEEE......... <3
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Date: 8/15/2013 11:06:00 AM
You know what you wanted to say when writing this one. Nice to the last detail.
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Date: 8/15/2013 3:55:00 AM
- You have described your feelings well in this great poem Maricel. - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/13/2013 1:17:00 PM
I understand these feelings here,,,you must follow your heart!! Excellent piece :)
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