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Wales To Me

WALES TO ME Wales to me is my dreamland never seen, Yet as heard and read, senses glisten. My imagism shimmering in sheen. I wish to have a glance, If I could get a chance! Wales to me with charms of mountain range Astounding enchanting standing strange. Nice Nature is careful to arrange. I wish to have a glance, If I could get a chance! Wales to me with alluring blue beach Sea waves roar, thrash on shore in high pitch Wavy designs on wet sand to stitch. I wish to have a glance, If I could get a chance! Wish to visit Wales in solitude observing Nature in plenitude to know the verisimilitude I wish to have a glance, If I could get a chance! 07/03/20 Fourth Place 'Wales ' Contest by Julia Ward

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Date: 7/7/2020 9:01:00 AM
This version of love for Wales is so melodious. Love how freely it flows. Really happy to see this in the list. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/7/2020 10:04:00 AM
Thank Aditi. Blessing
Date: 7/5/2020 1:43:00 PM
Anisha, I like your approach to this, that of a dreamy place to long for. Nice nature attributes. Congratulations on your win ~ John
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/7/2020 10:03:00 AM
Thanks John. Blessing
Date: 7/5/2020 4:49:00 AM
What attracted me about your poem was its freshness, agility, and facility. I expect you wrote it quickly to attain those three elements. Congratulations on doing so well in my contest, Anisha.
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Julia Ward
Date: 7/5/2020 3:28:00 PM
I find writing quickly to be an asset for those three elements, thus making your poem do well. Thank you for supporting my contest. :)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/5/2020 10:23:00 AM
Thank Julia. Yes I wrote it too quickly. Right you are. Love
Date: 7/3/2020 11:59:00 PM
Lovely lyric, Anisha, so charming. Good luck in the contest.
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