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Waking Up to Drop

Grandma goes for her coffee, whilst grandson keeps his eyes shut… —Quote by poet waking up to drop into the sandman’s beanbag sheet shifting with sun

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Paige Hind

Date: 8/13/2024 2:29:00 PM

Wow, this is filled with ingenuity... "into the sandman’s beanbag" <3

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/13/2024 10:07:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun Senryu write/story in just 3 lines. Can I have extra sleep then coffee??? Have a blessed day writing away...........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2024 11:46:00 AM

Sure…lol, why not?! :) Have a blessed day!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/13/2024 6:37:00 AM

Dear Kim, I love your Senryu! I wake up early in the morning (4 a.m.) to get ready for work; however, I enjoy the extra half hour to dream, which is one of my favorite times of day. Thanks for your smiling poem this morn! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2024 8:54:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it! My time is limited right now so a senryu worked! :) Have a happy day!