Waking Up to Drop

Grandma goes for her coffee,
whilst grandson keeps his eyes shut…
—Quote by poet

waking up to drop
into the sandman’s beanbag
sheet shifting with sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Wow, this is filled with ingenuity... "into the sandman’s beanbag" <3
Goldsmith Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 10:07 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun Senryu write/story in just 3 lines. Can I have extra sleep then coffee??? Have a blessed day writing away...........
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 11:46 AM
Sure…lol, why not?! :) Have a blessed day!
Rodgers Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 6:37 AM
Dear Kim, I love your Senryu! I wake up early in the morning (4 a.m.) to get ready for work; however, I enjoy the extra half hour to dream, which is one of my favorite times of day. Thanks for your smiling poem this morn! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 8:54 AM
Glad you enjoyed it! My time is limited right now so a senryu worked! :) Have a happy day!
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