Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Waking Up

Deep sleep has put me in a place..
My mouth is open to an unfamiliar taste..
I'm running so fast through a dark forest..
Branches and twigs are hindering me powerless..
There is an uphill climb with hands pulling on my waist..
I am being swayed back down with a disturbing haste..
I can see a face and hear a voice..
Silence is the only screaming noise..
Shaken with a fury till my feet find the ground..
I have fallen out of bed from a dream that came around..
Now Rosanna is leaning over the bed as I lie smiling on the floor..
No more Ghost Adventures for you, just comedy and music and no more..

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Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2011 at 11:42 PM hahaha. that ending is so cute for this poem. WEre you watching Ghost busters? heehee. I sure enoyed this one.

James Peranteau June 2, 2011 at 7:20 AM A well writen post here dear poet. One thing which I lack a craze for is, inviting those spook'm's in mine house ! *smiles* Have a wonderful week Micheal ! Much love, james

Daver Austin May 31, 2011 at 1:06 PM Good nightmare - if there is such a thing. The good part is your understanding Rosanna. Love, daver

James Foulk May 31, 2011 at 10:00 AM very creative piece, enjoyed reading it. thank you for reading and commenting on Fallen Tree.

Wilma Neels May 31, 2011 at 9:20 AM hehe, just an indication of how vivid your memory can be at times Michael.. I absolutely adore the part where Rosanna is leaning over the bed at a smiling you ;)

May 31, 2011 at 4:46 AM Quite the dream there Michael, enjoyed your creative and witty write. Love Alexa

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 30, 2011 at 10:12 AM A terrific scene and thank God for Roseanna who is the grounding foundation my friend.. no more Ghost Adventures before bedtime now luv.. super images and vibrant imagery luv.. is this a contest entry for Magic Words maybe? good luck if so.. your Jersey Girl in spooky mode now..oh.. luv..

John Rhinem May 30, 2011 at 10:08 AM Smile ~ Nice rhyme and tale and moment of, joy's awakeful sights I would say, my dear gifted and lovely friend. ~ I do love the softness of your wonderful verse dear Michael; always a pleasant flavour to enoy. ~ Thank for stopping by; very much appreciated. ~ “Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours, Always,'" John!:) ~

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 30, 2011 at 6:54 AM What a great way to wake up, with your dear Rosanna looking over you! ;) I enjoyed peeking into your dream or should I say nightmare? But yup no more Ghost adventures for you! Thanks for the sweet comments, I love rain poems too-- and speaking of 2nd pair of eyes.. soupmail in a bit okidoki ;) hugs

Delysia Hendricks May 30, 2011 at 6:52 AM hahaha. Fighting with your bedsheets, huh? I agree: comedy and music and no more for you. Nice one, Michael. :))

Michael J. Falotico May 30, 2011 at 6:31 AM I love all those Paranormal TV shows like Ghost Adventures and Ghost Hunters... But it does bring some strange dreams at night lol....Happy Memorial Day Soup Family!!!!! love Michael