Notes About The Poem
Date written: 05/17/2024

Waking Hour


birds sing 
on wing

big yawn 
at dawn 

sun's out
no doubt 

sunrise 
rubs eyes 

gets up
makes cup... 

of tea,
felt free!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 3:32 PM
Hello Edward, We all need our cup of coffee or tea to begin our day. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 11:25 AM
Hello, Edward, I begin my day with coffee. i make a pot and slowly drain the whole pot of coffee. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Ibeh Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 5:45 PM
True indeed, Darlene! I never start my mornings without a cup of coffee. Thanks for dropping by, my friend.
Crandall Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 7:48 PM
Nice concise poem Edward!
Ibeh Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 5:46 PM
Thank you, David! Sorry for the late reply.
Pandit Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 5:32 AM
Succinct pairs deliver brilliantly, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 7:43 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
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