Waking From a Catnap

Gently, 
the maple's 
veined hydra of a
tounge stretches out 
in fall to taste the midday 
mist, to sate its chronic thirst.
How like a baby in its mother's arms
is this rough-grained senior clothed in bark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Anish Avatar
December 12, 2009 at 9:20 PM
Enjoyed this! I do not think I have ever seen this form before! As for you comment - let's hope for the best - but not be too much like Pangloss whom I think was a character of Voltaire. Peace & Blesssings Matthew Anish
Guzzi Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 1:00 PM
sigh..full of life and death and the longing for continuance! Light & Love
Golden Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Fantastic fibonacci, Geoffery! This is rich in texture and imagery. Hugs, Donna
Jenkins Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 7:34 AM
VERY SOFT A SMOOTH POEM! LOVE IT
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 2:19 PM
Love the metaphoric use in this work. It is very descriptive also. Keep writing. Sara
Richards Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 1:13 PM
This is excellence in poetry...a perfect fibonacci poem, you are a gifted writer of comparisons in verse ~ Carrie
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