Waking

Day breaks,
Cold and quiet,
And my heart begs respite,
For fires that burned all now have turned
To ice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 4, 2010 at 7:44 AM
May our Lord bless you and yours on this Easter Day Nick. Love Carol and Family
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April 3, 2010 at 9:48 AM
A bit of a sad undertone but a very well written Cinquain. I hope day breaks will change its outlook for you soon. Thanks for sharing, Caroline.
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