Shirley Hawkins Poet Rhyme

Wake Up World

Wake up. world, and see the light,
Are we all losing the fight
For peace
What is the purpose of war?
When will this unnecessary carnage cease?
If we fight until the death
What benefits are there
For those of us left
Do we live to fight another day
Or close our eyes and softly pray.

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Gershon Wolf August 16, 2022 at 7:26 PM It's a tragedy to begin with, and then after a very short time it's a pointless tragedy. The two sides rarely know why they are fighting in many instances. Thanks, Shirley

Rico Leffanta August 16, 2022 at 11:04 AM The thing about war is all the brave young men die, leaving this world to profiteers and cowards. Enjoyed, Shirley! Aloha! Shirley Hawkins August 16, 2022 at 4:47 PM Thank you, Rico, There seems to be no end to the length some people will go for their insatiable appetite for power and greed. Without a thought to the consequences for others who are told to fight against their will. I hope you have a pleasant week, Rico

Deb M August 16, 2022 at 9:09 AM Nice poem Miss Shirley…..when will the carnage cease? Debx Shirley Hawkins August 16, 2022 at 4:53 PM A good question, Deb

L Milton Hankins August 16, 2022 at 9:01 AM Oh, what a valuable poem, Shirley. I'm afraid there will always be wars, unfortunately. But, you and I will be friends no matter what! Shirley Hawkins August 16, 2022 at 4:52 PM I am still smiling at your uplifting comment, Milt. I hope your day starts as happy as you have made mine. Thank you. Take care, Shirley

Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2022 at 8:11 AM Sometimes we must fight and always we must pray! Shirley Hawkins August 16, 2022 at 4:59 PM We fight for what's right and pray to try to rectify the wrongs. It is an endless battle. Take care, Kim Shirley