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Wake

arise with softness
          dawns instinctual rebirth
               creation imbibes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 2:55 PM
Hello Charlie Smith, this is a well written poem. i have enjoyed it. It is uplifting. have a nice day my friend.
Smith Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Thank you Darlene...
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Ahhhh, inspiring haiku Charlie! : )
Smith Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Thank you Connie...
Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 3:35 PM
This picture perfect poem paints the elixir of life beautifully, Charlie. Lovely write. Love and joy always.
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Thank you Freddie...
Gentry Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Brilliant haiku. Enjoyed.
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Thank you Susan...
Nipas Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Nicely done. Beautifully expressed. So true. The order and reliability of nature truly is something magical. Thank you.
Smith Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Thanks Wendy...
Wolf Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 10:05 PM
A Hi-IQ Haiku, Mr. Smith!! … And to think that I was expecting Finnegan's Wake when I saw the title! ~ Gershon
Smith Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Hope you weren't too disappointed, thanks Gershon...
Thomas Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Stiil creating entire paintings with only few words I see :) This is soft and beautiful Charlie.
Smith Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Thank you FJ...
Doll Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 10:10 AM
Wonderful haiku, Charlie.
Smith Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Thank You Warren...
Sathasivam Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Excellent. Well penned my friend. Thanks for sharing it.
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Thank you Ravi...
Onclaud Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 2:49 AM
graceful show of morning's rebirth... ohh so fine, charlie...huggs
Smith Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Nette...
Callus Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 1:55 AM
Waking up to soothing words like these is a guarantee of a lovely and peaceful day ahead, Charlie. Best regards // paul
Smith Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Thank you Paul...
Man Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 12:46 AM
Really nice Haiku, Charlie!
Smith Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Thank you L Man...
Pandit Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Great haiku Charlie!
Smith Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 12:08 PM
Thank you Vijay...
Sands Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Very nice, Charlie :)
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:16 AM
Thanks Heidi...
Michael Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 1:06 PM
A lovely way to awake... Nice haiku... All the best charlie
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Thank you Arturo...
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 12:57 PM
- Beautiful written, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:08 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise...
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