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Wait,Wait,Wait

Wait, wait, wait, that’s all I seem to have heard Patience is a virtue, but that word is getting blurred. Wait, wait, wait, what am I waiting for? A bus, a payment or a loved one to walk right through the door… Wait, wait, wait, time is passing by, nothing seems to happen… why? I am on my knees begging, supplications to towards the sky Wait, wait, wait, the knock at the door I’ts here, here’s the postman it’s what I’m waiting for… ©27.07.2012~GG~ Competition Entry

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/2/2012 12:27:00 AM

mt... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD

Fabiyas M V

Date: 8/1/2012 11:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win,Mandy!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2012 1:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Mandy. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2012 9:10:00 AM

congrats Mandy on a splendid write and win.. u captured my sentiments as well in this piece for I was born without patience luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/31/2012 7:39:00 AM

patience paid off, mandy.. round of applause for the awesome win!..:) huggs

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/31/2012 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win,Mandy....Great write...

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 7/31/2012 12:17:00 AM

Congrats on your win MAndy...very nice!!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/30/2012 5:39:00 PM

Congrats on your wonderful win, Mandy! Some things are worth the wait! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 7/30/2012 2:48:00 PM

Haaaaaaaaaaa I love this. Congratulations on your win Mandy... As Always, Shar

David Williams

Date: 7/30/2012 2:40:00 PM

Mandy congrats on your win, see he brought good news...David

Don Johnson

Date: 7/27/2012 3:03:00 PM

yes we seem 2spend our time waitin waytin all the time...good one mate

Jeffry Cohan

Date: 7/27/2012 12:04:00 PM

WHATEVER YOU ARE WAITING FOR IT CAN'T BE AS IMPORTANT AS MY WAITING FOR YOU TO GET THE PROPER RECOGNITION YOU SO DESERVE-GIRL--THE ONLY THING I'M WAITING FOR IS WORLD PEACE....AND I DON'T THINK THERE'S MUCH CHANCE OF MY RECEIVING THAT ANY TIME SOON---YET IF I KNOW YOU, IN YOUR POEM YOU'RE WAITING FOR THE SAME THING I AM---ANOTHER INTROSPECTIVE POEM THAT GIVES ME PAUSE TO SCREAM OUT "BRAVO" your phriend, phiend and phan PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2012 11:23:00 AM

Just remember, Mandy, a watch pot never boils!!! I just leave the situation rather than wait for it. But it's cool when suddenly that mail simply arrives!! Cute one.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/27/2012 10:19:00 AM

Hope it was worth the wait Mandy, again a wonderful down to earth poem from you. harry

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/27/2012 7:37:00 AM

i'm glad you didn't have to wait for comments on this poem! it's a good one - best of luck in the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2012 4:07:00 AM

A bill or a love letter......:) - Like it Mandy, sweet verse. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

David Williams

Date: 7/27/2012 12:53:00 AM

Morning Mandy, I like this a lot, sums most of us up, good luck, the sun is out in Southport....David