Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Verse

Wait,Wait,Wait

Wait, wait, wait, that’s all I seem to have heard
Patience is a virtue, but that word is getting blurred.
Wait, wait, wait, what am I waiting for?
A bus, a payment or a loved one to walk right  through the door…
Wait, wait, wait, time is passing by, nothing seems to happen… why?
I am on my knees begging, supplications to towards the sky
Wait, wait, wait, the knock at the door
I’ts here, here’s the postman it’s what I’m waiting for…

©27.07.2012~GG~
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Poet Destroyer A August 2, 2012 at 12:27 AM mt... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD

Fabiyas M V August 1, 2012 at 11:51 PM Congratulations on your great win,Mandy!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2012 at 1:57 PM Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Mandy. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 31, 2012 at 9:10 AM congrats Mandy on a splendid write and win.. u captured my sentiments as well in this piece for I was born without patience luv..

Nette Onclaud July 31, 2012 at 7:39 AM patience paid off, mandy.. round of applause for the awesome win!..:) huggs

Olusegun Arowolo July 31, 2012 at 6:22 AM Congratulations on your win,Mandy....Great write...

Jonas L. Rozario July 31, 2012 at 12:17 AM Congrats on your win MAndy...very nice!!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 30, 2012 at 5:39 PM Congrats on your wonderful win, Mandy! Some things are worth the wait! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Sharon Ruebel July 30, 2012 at 2:48 PM Haaaaaaaaaaa I love this. Congratulations on your win Mandy... As Always, Shar

David Williams July 30, 2012 at 2:40 PM Mandy congrats on your win, see he brought good news...David

Don Johnson July 27, 2012 at 3:03 PM yes we seem 2spend our time waitin waytin all the time...good one mate

Jeffry Cohan July 27, 2012 at 12:04 PM WHATEVER YOU ARE WAITING FOR IT CAN'T BE AS IMPORTANT AS MY WAITING FOR YOU TO GET THE PROPER RECOGNITION YOU SO DESERVE-GIRL--THE ONLY THING I'M WAITING FOR IS WORLD PEACE....AND I DON'T THINK THERE'S MUCH CHANCE OF MY RECEIVING THAT ANY TIME SOON---YET IF I KNOW YOU, IN YOUR POEM YOU'RE WAITING FOR THE SAME THING I AM---ANOTHER INTROSPECTIVE POEM THAT GIVES ME PAUSE TO SCREAM OUT "BRAVO" your phriend, phiend and phan PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2012 at 11:23 AM Just remember, Mandy, a watch pot never boils!!! I just leave the situation rather than wait for it. But it's cool when suddenly that mail simply arrives!! Cute one.

Harry Horsman July 27, 2012 at 10:19 AM Hope it was worth the wait Mandy, again a wonderful down to earth poem from you. harry

Ilene Bauer July 27, 2012 at 7:37 AM i'm glad you didn't have to wait for comments on this poem! it's a good one - best of luck in the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 27, 2012 at 4:07 AM A bill or a love letter......:) - Like it Mandy, sweet verse. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

David Williams July 27, 2012 at 12:53 AM Morning Mandy, I like this a lot, sums most of us up, good luck, the sun is out in Southport....David