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Waiting Waiting Waiting

Impossible to catch my breath
waiting for the other shoe to drop
~ the suspense claiming another victim



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 4:57 PM
sometimes that's the way I feel in this country today...enough said about that
Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 5:37 PM
How many shoes need to drop ?
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