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Waiting To See

waiting to see A small lump near my left ear What if it’s cancer? Will he stay? Received 8th place in "Quinzaine" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 8:06:00 AM

Congratulations Susan on your win in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "Quinzaine" Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/17/2011 1:26:00 PM

Hope there isn't any truth attach to your entry Susan.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.. ;) Wilma

Jack Horne

Date: 7/16/2011 1:46:00 PM

Many congrats on your wins, Susan : ) I do hope this isn't factual - and, if so, I hope all will be well

John Freeman

Date: 7/16/2011 12:33:00 PM

Susan, Many congrtulations on your worthy win. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2011 8:08:00 PM

What did you find out about this lump, dear? I have to tell you, it wasn't until this second time I read your poem that it dawned on me, "he" must be your husband. It is strange to me you would even have to ask that. I was thinking you were referring to the cancer itself as the "he" I am so dense sometimes. Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/15/2011 6:52:00 PM

Congrats Susan on your top ten win with this emotional piece.. hope all is well luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/15/2011 2:58:00 PM

Serious expression penned with deep humor, Susan Congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2011 9:38:00 PM

INteresting to see what people write about for this contest. Did you really find a lump near your ear?

Black Eyed Susan
Date: 7/14/2011 1:37:00 PM

yes. the dermatologist thought it might be an irregular mole, but wasn't sure, so he sent it off to be biopsied.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2011 12:04:00 AM

a stirring question, susan... i like the way this was phrased; wonderful!.. winning luck to you with huggs! :) nette