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Waiting To See

waiting to see                              
   
                              A small lump near my left ear

                                      What if it’s cancer?

                                            Will he stay?



Received 8th place in "Quinzaine" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/18/2011 8:06:00 AM Congratulations Susan on your win in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "Quinzaine" Love, Carol Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 7/17/2011 1:26:00 PM Hope there isn't any truth attach to your entry Susan.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.. ;) Wilma Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/16/2011 1:46:00 PM Many congrats on your wins, Susan : ) I do hope this isn't factual - and, if so, I hope all will be well Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 7/16/2011 12:33:00 PM Susan, Many congrtulations on your worthy win. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/15/2011 8:08:00 PM What did you find out about this lump, dear? I have to tell you, it wasn't until this second time I read your poem that it dawned on me, "he" must be your husband. It is strange to me you would even have to ask that. I was thinking you were referring to the cancer itself as the "he" I am so dense sometimes. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/15/2011 6:52:00 PM Congrats Susan on your top ten win with this emotional piece.. hope all is well luv.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/15/2011 2:58:00 PM Serious expression penned with deep humor, Susan Congratulations Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/13/2011 9:38:00 PM INteresting to see what people write about for this contest. Did you really find a lump near your ear? Login to Reply Black Eyed Susan Date: 7/14/2011 1:37:00 PM yes. the dermatologist thought it might be an irregular mole, but wasn't sure, so he sent it off to be biopsied.

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/13/2011 12:04:00 AM a stirring question, susan... i like the way this was phrased; wonderful!.. winning luck to you with huggs! :) nette Login to Reply