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Waiting To See

waiting to see                              
   
                              A small lump near my left ear

                                      What if it’s cancer?

                                            Will he stay?



Received 8th place in "Quinzaine" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 18, 2011 at 8:06 AM

Congratulations Susan on your win in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "Quinzaine" Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

July 17, 2011 at 1:26 PM

Hope there isn't any truth attach to your entry Susan.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.. ;) Wilma

Jack Horne

July 16, 2011 at 1:46 PM

Many congrats on your wins, Susan : ) I do hope this isn't factual - and, if so, I hope all will be well

John Freeman

July 16, 2011 at 12:33 PM

Susan, Many congrtulations on your worthy win. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

July 15, 2011 at 8:08 PM

What did you find out about this lump, dear? I have to tell you, it wasn't until this second time I read your poem that it dawned on me, "he" must be your husband. It is strange to me you would even have to ask that. I was thinking you were referring to the cancer itself as the "he" I am so dense sometimes. Congrats on your win!