Waiting to feel


Drenched in the downpour of past tense emotions, seeing the future is part of the dream Lost in the middle, the leftover mentions, chasing the wind with a full head of steam Why did it end, once I found the beginning, how can I wait when the truth has been told Questions survive throughout yesterday's shadows, losing my way without someone to hold ~ Butterflies bloom in the pit of my belly, clenching my fists, like it matters at all Banging my head, metaphorically speaking, seeking the pain of that prodigal wall I should accept every gift I've been given, lifting the bows from the wastepaper bin Yet here I am with my weaknesses showing, waiting to feel the rejection again

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Date: 9/3/2024 12:04:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your write. Life is filled with good/sad times. Guess rejection is part of it. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Date: 7/26/2024 3:27:00 AM
Lovely flow to your rhyme, Chris, though a bit sad:)
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Date: 7/25/2024 2:09:00 PM
chris - it's always a pleasure to read your beautifully-flowing poems, and this is no exception...
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Date: 7/25/2024 7:14:00 AM
Accepting the gifts with grace, steeling ourselves against the negativity and rejection, one of the many things we try to achieve a balance with in life. Nice post
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