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Waiting On You

No matter the occasion we serve memories remembered we are not, lest we fail our appetizing attitudes are often remedies No matter the occasion we serve memories appeasing, tolerating all for the treasury hot plates, hot tempers, our cooler heads prevail No matter the occasion we serve memories remembered we are not, lest we fail

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Doug Vinson

Date: 4/18/2017 10:24:00 AM

Bless the servers - they see lots of the bad side of humanity and keep on going.

Poetprentice Dupins
Date: 4/18/2017 3:43:00 PM

Yes they do and thank you for your response.

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/8/2017 1:46:00 PM

A creative triolet.:-) I like the meaning, a most under appreciated group... your words a nice reminder to all. Wonderfully penned, a pleasure to read. lynnxx On the Canadian west coast, they are writing legislation for female servers/hostesses to not be required to wear high heels and 'sexy restrictive' tight uniforms' as mandatory for employment. Health issues are cited.

Poetprentice Dupins
Date: 4/8/2017 3:03:00 PM

That's ridiculous that they have to have those requirements of "dress" in the first place. I hope they pass that legislation. Thanks for reading my work. Glad you enjoyed it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2017 7:32:00 PM

I enjoyed your triolet, Poet. The triolet is a wonderful form to work in.

Poetprentice Dupins
Date: 4/3/2017 7:35:00 PM

Its my first one. I found it difficult at first but it came together nicely. Thanks, Andrea!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/3/2017 7:32:00 AM

Well penned my friend! So much truth in this write :) xomo

Poetprentice Dupins
Date: 4/3/2017 7:46:00 AM

thanks!