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Waiting On You


No matter the occasion we serve memories
remembered we are not, lest we fail
our appetizing attitudes are often remedies 
No matter the occasion we serve memories
appeasing, tolerating all for the treasury
hot plates, hot tempers, our cooler heads prevail
No matter the occasion we serve memories
remembered we are not, lest we fail

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Doug Vinson

April 18, 2017 at 10:24 AM

Bless the servers - they see lots of the bad side of humanity and keep on going.

Poetprentice Dupins

April 18, 2017 at 3:43 PM

Yes they do and thank you for your response.

Lynn Marie

April 8, 2017 at 1:46 PM

A creative triolet.:-) I like the meaning, a most under appreciated group... your words a nice reminder to all. Wonderfully penned, a pleasure to read. lynnxx On the Canadian west coast, they are writing legislation for female servers/hostesses to not be required to wear high heels and 'sexy restrictive' tight uniforms' as mandatory for employment. Health issues are cited.

Poetprentice Dupins

April 8, 2017 at 3:03 PM

That's ridiculous that they have to have those requirements of "dress" in the first place. I hope they pass that legislation. Thanks for reading my work. Glad you enjoyed it.