Waiting For the World To End

If you look backwards in time you might see us
It was August… too many summers ago to recall
Sometime after midnight, ….my brother and I
Slipping through the valley of sleep
Crawling out the window, to the roof of the old sun-porch
Drinking excitement in late summer's breeze
Sprawled on a bed of shingles and leaves

Anticipation growing with each falling star
Holding our breaths, as the sky fell apart…
                                … while waiting to see if the world would end

Another year drifted by, other summers would fly
Childhood changed shapes, many ways like the wind
We forgot of the thrill of that lone summer night

Chill of winter set in,… with the worst kind of news, 
         ...our mother was ill
   
Through the sill of the window, we heard bitter cold wind
We sat her bed, while a new storm was brewing

…….She was slipping…..slipping into the valley of sleep

Together we'd been, now together again,…. sometime after midnight

                             …waiting, we were, for our world to end
      



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1/26/16
For Contest: "Waiting"
Sponsored by Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 3, 2016 at 3:30 AM
Carrie, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
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January 29, 2016 at 2:30 AM
Lovely poem n win Carrie.. big congrats!
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January 28, 2016 at 11:29 PM
splendidly conveyed, carrie...huge congrats on your win and huggs!
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January 28, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Carrie, beautiful poem...Congrats on your placement :) *Smiles* -luloo
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January 26, 2016 at 8:19 PM
A sad and powerful story, told masterfully your poetry, Carrie. Well done!
Parker Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 6:26 PM
A sad yet reflective poem that all families go through..good luck in the contest
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