Waiting For the Eclipse

Saddest love story 
Sun chases moon forever 
Never catches it 

They stare across the 
Ocean laid out between them 
Praying they could meet 

A decade is an 
Eternity when you can''t 
Be with who you love 

Saddest love story 
Their time apart is too long 
Together too short 


- If you were the sun, and I were the moon...would you miss me as much as I would miss you?-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 31, 2014 at 9:30 AM
PEN, :) thanks you for the wonderful winning poem. Enjoy your day. Love ~ SKAT~
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January 15, 2014 at 12:53 PM
- Both beautiful and sad .... well done, Jaquetta - I like it!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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